Thursday, July 18, 2019
Critical Response Essay
Advertisement can attract anyone that it wishes. In the essay, ââ¬Å"Whatââ¬â¢s Natural about Our Natural Products?â⬠by Sarah Federman, Sarah talks about how the words ââ¬Å" nature ââ¬Å" and ââ¬Å" natural ââ¬Å" are being used to sell more products and seem ââ¬Å" healthy ââ¬Å". She goes on to discuss how the word ââ¬Å" natural ââ¬Å" has turned into a marketing asset. Federman shows readers that food companies, uses these words to manipulate consumers to buy more of their products. It is a technique thatââ¬â¢s used for products like Kraft Cheese to get sales to go up. It is known that Kraft sells Natural Shredded nonfat cheese, Natural Reduced fat swiss, and Natural cheese cubes. Federman writes, ââ¬Å" Kraft has done nothing special with the cheese itself, ââ¬Å" natural ââ¬Å" in this case presumably relates to the shredding, reducing and cubing processâ⬠(442). Companies way of attracting on new audience. I agree with sarahââ¬â¢s argument abou t using ââ¬Ë natural ââ¬Å" and ââ¬Å" nature ââ¬Å" just to sell products. Advertisers shouldnââ¬â¢t use these words because if you read the labels, its still man made ingredients in it. To Federman, natural means, ââ¬Å" products or service any or all of the following a healthy alternative, an environmentally friendly product, vegetarians, and or produced without synthetic chemicalsâ⬠(442). Companies can get away with calling their product natural ingredients. But mixed in these natural, there are unhealthy components like corn syrup, dicalcium, and trisodium phosphate. These oils arenââ¬â¢t healthy, but because of the media, everything with natural on it is automatically good for you. Federman makes a strong point about about how companies can say its ââ¬Å" natural ââ¬Å" but not even how a product is made is natural. she states, ââ¬Å" I found nothing that explained the meaning of ââ¬Å" naturally baked ââ¬Å" , do you think this means they leave the chips out in the sun to crispen up? probably not, so why does this process cost more per ounce when it uses less fat? ââ¬Å"(443). Companies never tell the full ingredients list nor tell you exactly how its made, so to call ità natural is false. The consumers want to be healthy and fit, so the cost wouldnââ¬â¢t bother them. It cost more for something that is less manufactured, but most of the time companies just say its natural just to make more money. This proves that society has an effect on people using it, we want it, but these arenââ¬â¢t good for us, and advertisers fool us into buying it. Federman stated all her thoughts about how companies put the word natural on any labels to attract the audience who thinks buying product that claim to be natural, to show them that you canââ¬â¢t always believe what you see. When reading Federman essay, it can feel like on lecture at time, but as you and some what sarcastic. When Federman states, ââ¬Å" variations of the words ââ¬Å" nature ââ¬Å" and ââ¬Å" natural ââ¬Å" are used for product naming to distinguish alternative medicine practitioners from their western counterparts â⬠¦ blue jeans ââ¬Å" (441). it seem as if youââ¬â¢re sitting in the lecture. She makes it seem as if she speaking as part of a group of people who against companies putting natural on the products. Federman expresses emotion for her topic throughout the essay without a demanding tone, but slightly funny. Gladly, her tone doesnââ¬â¢t affect her writing. Without the tone she gives off, the essay wouldnââ¬â¢t stand out, catch the readerââ¬â¢s attention. The tone makes sure it changes the thoughts of the readers. I use to buy products that said ââ¬Å" all natural ââ¬Å" or ââ¬Å" nature ââ¬Å" on it and spend all that money. Thinking if I buy those products, I will be living healthy. But, after reading Sarah Federman essay, I know now that the products I brought were lack of natural ingredients. The tactics that these advertisers are using, and the products that say natural is the same as the original. I agree with all of Sarah Federman claims, and i fully understand her thoughts and logic about ââ¬Å" natural products ââ¬Å". Works Cited Eschholz, Paul A., Alfred F. Rosa, and Virginia P. Clark. Language Awareness: Readings for College Writers. Print.
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